tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post1693396627703291411..comments2024-03-12T00:53:33.194-07:00Comments on THE DUST WILL WAIT: Pensieve's Poetic License ~ April ChallengePamelahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05404943895800549273noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-30267832623417820132008-04-14T20:16:00.000-07:002008-04-14T20:16:00.000-07:00Wonderful poem! I love the progression and key wor...Wonderful poem! I love the progression and key words. Very creative! <BR/><BR/>Thanks for coming by too....and I would LOVE to see that cherry blossom blizzard! (it was 97 here today)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-84648149164881491502008-04-14T18:06:00.000-07:002008-04-14T18:06:00.000-07:00nicely done, I like part four, we could never be p...nicely done, I like part four, we could never be prepare as the weather keeps changing<BR/><BR/>thanks for visiting visiting my blogAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-72032651922989906312008-04-14T15:19:00.000-07:002008-04-14T15:19:00.000-07:00You did a great job in capturing spring.You did a great job in capturing spring.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-24831342510169117152008-04-13T15:59:00.000-07:002008-04-13T15:59:00.000-07:00I love reading your Haiku!I love reading your Haiku!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-4760553434242952652008-04-13T07:52:00.000-07:002008-04-13T07:52:00.000-07:00Beautiful! I forgot to tell you that the view in t...Beautiful! I forgot to tell you that the view in the picture above is lovely! Is that from your back yard? Breath taking!kittenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18049382336915982813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-63017624011192797662008-04-13T07:21:00.000-07:002008-04-13T07:21:00.000-07:00Oh I like that. It all fits perfectly.Oh I like that. It all fits perfectly.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13219366045767828564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-64749183530514839092008-04-13T04:07:00.000-07:002008-04-13T04:07:00.000-07:00I *love* the rainbow haiku! Beautiful! I should ...I *love* the rainbow haiku! Beautiful! I should really join in on this thing. It would be good exercise for my brain.Jennihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08483309441288822407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-64138473795212689162008-04-12T16:39:00.000-07:002008-04-12T16:39:00.000-07:00Very Nice!!Have a great weekend.JenniferVery Nice!!<BR/><BR/>Have a great weekend.<BR/><BR/>Jenniferjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08547226679311827501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-4297512223671421472008-04-12T14:35:00.000-07:002008-04-12T14:35:00.000-07:00Beautiful, Pamela.The rhythm is lovely.Beautiful, Pamela.<BR/><BR/>The rhythm is lovely.Sandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01727506305170439878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-69255485519390617612008-04-12T08:33:00.000-07:002008-04-12T08:33:00.000-07:00Nice job , Pamela. I think that we may be having t...Nice job , Pamela. I think that we may be having the same kind of spring. Today, I am waiting for the sun to prevail.Mollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06588693337401747260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-46894455371098992112008-04-12T06:56:00.000-07:002008-04-12T06:56:00.000-07:00You are just so brilliant.You are just so brilliant.Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10512819792748140484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-78046528448851037322008-04-12T00:50:00.000-07:002008-04-12T00:50:00.000-07:00Awww what swampy said "Pamiku". Love that. Altho...Awww what swampy said "Pamiku". Love that. Although I love your poem too :o)Joy T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02243256440092139917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-11707886452013138482008-04-11T21:25:00.000-07:002008-04-11T21:25:00.000-07:00I loved it all, but particularly loved the snow re...I loved it all, but particularly loved the snow reaching for the skyline. Like it had a purpose for it's retreat. It's not just abandoning us, it's going somewhere ethereal.<BR/><BR/>Very nice!Wendsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09651081249568327791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-13985702645186976072008-04-11T16:36:00.000-07:002008-04-11T16:36:00.000-07:00Beautifully … these poemsillustrate experiencesUni...Beautifully … these poems<BR/>illustrate experiences<BR/>Universal<BR/><BR/>I usually do Haiku Friday each week but decided I could do 'double' duty since one was about Spring ;--)<BR/><A HREF="http://sacredruminations.blogspot.com/2008/04/haiku-friday-30-spring-color-from.html" REL="nofollow">Joyful Burst of Color</A> and <BR/><A HREF="http://smallreflections.blogspot.com/2008/04/haiku-friday-29-of-oddities-and-change.html " REL="nofollow">Of Oddities and Change</A><BR/>Hugs and blessings,storytellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14101550406171982090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-69889672889706797062008-04-11T12:46:00.000-07:002008-04-11T12:46:00.000-07:00Very nice writing! I enjoyed the rhythm.Very nice writing! I enjoyed the rhythm.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-1403390369737363452008-04-11T12:39:00.000-07:002008-04-11T12:39:00.000-07:00These are very, very nice. Great imagery!These are very, very nice. Great imagery!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-29372255390352745382008-04-11T10:14:00.000-07:002008-04-11T10:14:00.000-07:00very well done. Great tempo throughout - makes me ...very well done. Great tempo throughout - makes me want some fresh peaches!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-33353769846433815862008-04-11T08:33:00.000-07:002008-04-11T08:33:00.000-07:00Nice!Nice!Janahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05755365059311051601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-51313009831657631222008-04-11T08:30:00.000-07:002008-04-11T08:30:00.000-07:00Ha! Pamiku--gotta love that Swampmeister!Weather ...Ha! Pamiku--gotta love that Swampmeister!<BR/><BR/>Weather on your brain? Me thinks you might be experiencing slightly lower and less Spring-like temperatures than moi. Just think--when I'm sweltering in 100 degree temps and 300% humidity--you'll be shootin' the breeze!<BR/><BR/>Love these selections, Pamela. They make perfect sense to me!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-63069367480325972102008-04-11T07:19:00.000-07:002008-04-11T07:19:00.000-07:00Nicely done!Nicely done!Heather Pletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01975795000759157299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-60663772455977729522008-04-11T06:05:00.000-07:002008-04-11T06:05:00.000-07:00Beautiful, as always. Love this form...is it Pamik...Beautiful, as always. Love this form...is it Pamiku?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-57142633447914247422008-04-11T06:02:00.000-07:002008-04-11T06:02:00.000-07:00I like it! I used a different form of haiku as wel...I like it! <BR/><BR/>I used a different form of haiku as well. I like the meter on yours.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-17543703229064846612008-04-10T20:52:00.000-07:002008-04-10T20:52:00.000-07:00Aww, now that makes it sound beautiful!Aww, now that makes it sound beautiful!Kilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09412146547477399452noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-59056760345449419632008-04-10T20:45:00.000-07:002008-04-10T20:45:00.000-07:00Hi Pamela, lovely little poem. The dust storm was ...Hi Pamela, lovely little poem. <BR/><BR/>The dust storm was terrible,<BR/>I needed your feather duster inside, oh the dust was bad you could even feel it hitting you like fine rain..Jeanettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16993328454036416214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29569768.post-46844390960379389692008-04-10T19:44:00.000-07:002008-04-10T19:44:00.000-07:00Nice -That is a different form of Haiku than I use...Nice -<BR/><BR/>That is a different form of Haiku than I used.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com